Does anyone here have a thing for incredibly long-form, chapter-divided, /d/-tier (no dicks, of course. Just expansion and some mild shrink/growth) fetishistic smut?
I'm trying to write one, and, of the people I've sent it to, they all think it's good enough, but no one ever gives me more feedback than that (probably because they understandably don't want to read all of it -- it's 50+ pages long
). So I was wondering if any of you might have some critique for me.
The premise is basically, "what if Nepgear found a very sexual genie that could grant her and Uni's desires to not be so flat/small anymore?"
I would've gone to /d/ instead if it didn't rely so much on Neptunia knowledge, and, at the end of the day, I want it to have as many elements of yuri as possible.
Link, if you're okay with my kink: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1miORjzFqLhWkqqW7CaeuRkBp7QaU3T2Kxvm-dY74nDg/edit?usp=sharing
If I can prove myself as a writer to my audience, I might want to write something more vanilla yuri one day.
If you do have critiques, though, just put 'em in the doc itself if possible. Don't waste posts, pls.
Anyway, here's a cute Nep image, just to make sure my post is relevant.